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Secret Truth Series #17: Lament Of The Text Ad Copywriter
Keywords and bids are over-rated, while search queries and text ad copy is under-appreciated. We’ve talked about the first three already, and now it’s time to talk about text ads.
As described in the book, text ads don’t offer a lot of space and yet have a huge responsibility. They’re the answer to those questions, the reason for your organization, the driver behind your quality scores, and almost certainly the most under-allocated aspect of your paid search campaign in terms of time and resources.
In a perfect world, you’d spend perhaps 50% of your PPC management time working on ad copy. My guess is the industry average is way below 5%.
This is true because the complexities of keyword selection, campaign organization, match types, quality score, bidding, and just about everything else we’ve discussed thus far consumes too much of our time and energy. We’re simply out of resources (time and energy) when we get to the point where we should hunker down and be creative.
There’s also an amazing dearth of good tools for managing the process of creating and reporting on good text ads. There are dozens or hundreds of keyword tools. There are nearly that many bidding programs or algorithms. Where are the tools that genuinely help paid search managers write, analyze, and test creatives?
Talk about a crying need in the market.
The Job Text Ads Must Do
The central premise of High-Resolution PPC is that every search is a question, and our job as paid search managers is to get the right answers in front of the right questions and pay the right amount for the priviledge.
Delivering good answers is the key to success. Of course there are many ways to answer any question. To make the problem even harder, the answer needs to suggest that the unqualified move no farther forward (don’t click) while at the same time trying to persuade the qualified to drive ahead (please click).
….and do it with just 70 characters plus the headline.
…while positioned next to 6-8 other ads (and another dozen organic answers) all vying for the searchers attention.
What’s so hard about that?
The Many Messages Of A Text Ad
Ad copy can fight for clicks with humor or wit. They can focus on features or benefits. They can be direct or indirect. They can push prices or discounts. They can ask for the click or promise great benefits on the other side of the click. There are probably 50 or more different kinds of messages that could be fitted into those 70 characters.
More often than not, the right answer is to include two or three different messages. One seeking trust, one confirming benefit, and another suggesting a good deal – for example.But that’s the challenge. Deciding the strategy and the tactic and then executing.
It’s a very tough gig.
One simple way to reduce the complexity is to structure the writing process. Most ads are written ‘stream of consciousness’ while staring at a blank page form or page. The complex sets of needs listed above are synthesised in someone’s head, and a few lines come out.
That method can work, obviously, but it requires a very gifted writer. I think that’s a very rare gift.
Creating Ads with Copy Blocks
A more deliberate method is to consider each of the messaging options and write copy blocks to express each of them. So for example you would write 3 to 5 ways to talk about the benefits, 3 to 5 ways (or more) to talk about features, 3 to 5 ways to establish trust, 3 to 5 ways to promote pricing, 3 to 5 calls to action, and so on.
Now assemble ads by combining some of these elements. This ensures that your copy testing spans the range of contextual options. It forces you to consider each messages you want to use. It allows you to think about how your ad compare to those of your competitors. And it sets the stage to find those copywriting breakthroughs that deliver hugh CTR gains.
This is far from the only copywriting strategy. It is, however, one that can be used along-side of others. There are many great resources for text ad copyrighting advice, and I suggest you seek them out.
The core advice is simple:
- Increase the percentage of your time spend on text ads.
- Define a strategy for writing ad copy
- Learn and use tactics and techniques to find and develop the best ads – don’t just ‘sit down and write em.’
Give ad copywriting the respect and resources it deserves, and your PPC results will benefit.
What Do You Think?
This blog post is part of a series extending and amplifying the ideas in our free ebook ’21 Secret Truths of High-Resolution PPC’.
What they’re saying: “Everything you know about AdWords is the basics Google wanted you to know. Just enough to get you hooked. But what if there was fundamental secrets that they neglected to share? Would you want to know them? Now you can! 21 Secrets Truths is what you must read, no, act on, before your competitors do.”
- Bryan Eisenberg Conversion Expert and New York Times Best-Selling Author ’.
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London SMX Advanced 2010 Review
Alex and I are just back from SMX Advanced London. It was a really enjoyable event – great venue, nice city (hadn’t been in years), perfect weather (for the 30 second walk from the hotel), really nice set of attendees from an amazing array of countries, and for the most part very informative panels.

As at the US-based SMX shows, the PPC crowd is dwarfed by the SEOs. But there was a dedicated PPC track on Day 1 and there were about 50 folks in most of the sessions. On Day 2 social took over from SEO, and analytics replaced PPC, and split stayed the same – I guess social is more fun than analytics.
My personal favorite presentations were Karl Blanks of Conversion Rate Experts, who is clearly a super-sharp guy and did a killer job of explaining the how’s and why’s of serious A|B or MVT conversion rate testing, and the inimitable Marty Wientraub of AimClear who along with his colleague Merry Morud just absolutely tore-it-up in the FaceBook marketing session. (I have a video of that in its entirety, but you wouldn’t believe it even if you saw it – catch their act when it comes to town!).
Search the #SMX HashTag to review the play-by-play from this great show.
Our Panels
I was on two panels, the first was called ‘Exploring Google’s New Ad Formats’, and the second was ‘Amazing New PPC Tactics’.
In the first I talked about how to think about all the new ad formats, and ways to evaluate them and all the upcoming changes and new formats we haven’t even seen yet. The slides don’t really tell the story so I’m not posting them, but I hope to turn the ideas into a full blog post or maybe even a webinar sometime soon.
I have shared the slides from my PPC Tactics (below) because I think these do make sense without the audio. These are all topics that have been covered here in past posts – it’s sort of a greatest hits of High-Resolution PPC,
Alex Cohen gave a rip-roaring presentation on Day 2 at the ‘Top 10 Customized Search Analytics Reports’ session. His slides are below, but it’s a shame you can’t hear the great delivery and info as he presented it. Maybe one day a video will turn up somewhere…
We met a lot of new people at the show, and it was great to see and catch up with a surprising number of friends, clients, and people just about to add ClickEquations to their PPC tools arsenal. Thanks to Chris Sherman for setting up and hosting this great event.
Secret Truth Series #16: What’s Wrong With A Good ROAS
If there’s a theme to the 21 Secret Truths, it may be that almost nothing in paid search is what it appears.
Keywords aren’t what you’re trying to optimize, ad groups aren’t for organizing keywords, campaigns aren’t for organizing ad groups, bids don’t determine how much you pay, and so on. So perhaps by now it won’t surprise you to learn that the profit reported by paid search often isn’t real either.
When Making Money Isn’t Enough
The idea of spending $1 and getting back $3 sounds great. If we take in more than we put out, our business is profitable. Everyone knows that.
But as with all the other little-white-confusions, the definitions of ‘cost’ and ‘revenue’ used in the common language of PPC are incomplete and inaccurate.
The trouble is that AdWords, GA, Yahoo, Ad Center, and many other tools have no mechanism for including the cost of goods (or cost of sales) in their reports and calculations. They report Gross Profit, and Gross Return – which they call return-on-ad-spend or ROAS. (Although Google does sometimes stretch and literally call this number ‘profit’.)
ROAS is a ‘better than nothing’ metric. But ROI, a true Net Profit based return calculation is vastly superior and more accurate. Anyone managing substantial paid search programs for products or services that don’t have a flat cost shouldn’t settle for ROAS.
How ROAS Lies
The trouble with ROAS isn’t just that it gives the false or increased appearance of success. It shows positive numbers that should be negative, and high positive numbers where there should be low ones – that is true.
But for most businesses margin levels aren’t consistent. Some products or services are marked up 20% while others 80%. This means that all ROAS numbers aren’t off by the same percentage, so you can’t just adjust them in your head. And even if you know specific or approximate margins by product category, you can’t be sure which keyword drive which item sales. Very often the keyword ‘little black dress’ leads to the sales of shoes along with or instead of the dress.
Looking at ROAS vs ROI at the query, keyword, ad group, or campaign level always leaves a vastly different impression and lead to very different decision making and prioritization.
There are many data elements we use in PPC that should or could be improved, but betterness (I made that word up) is beyond our control. Accepting ROAS is voluntary and generally unwise.
Except
It should be noted, if it isn’t obvious, that there are some businesses for whom ROAS is functionally equal to ROI, and therefore the ROAS problem doesn’t exist. Pure lead-gen with a single type of conversion is one example since there is functionally no cost-of-goods. There are others. So if in your business the gross profit is the net profit (at least excluding fixed cost and overhead which is generally not considered in the ROI calculation, this topic doesn’t apply.
Living with Low Quality Score
At the quality score session at SMX Advanced London yesterday, a question was asked about what to do with low quality score keywords. It was framed as a query of when you should turn off keywords because they were below a certain quality score level.
I helped answer the question, and then tweeted some quick advice on the subject. It got a few RT’s and the interest and some more thinking drove me to elaborate in this post.
While the virtues of high quality score, and the techniques to try to achieve it have been covered here often, the truth is that for many reasons most accounts sometimes have keywords with low quality scores – which we’ll define as those of 5 or lower.
Broadly speaking you should work to improve those scores, and often if you can’t the best answer is to pause or delete those keywords. But that isn’t always wise or feasible.
B2B Keywords With High CPCs
Patricia Hursh of SmartSearchMarketing.com made the great point in her presentation that for B2B Marketers with very expensive keywords, often it’s much better to write copy that *discourages* unqualified clicks, which results in low CTR and thereby poor quality score – but much better ROI.
Ideally you’d query-mine those keywords as completely as possible – to find related words on which you can earn good QS – but that won’t fully solve the problem and so her advice is wise.
Quality Score Collateral Damage
The other case is keywords that are important to your business or goals and have low qualty score that you just haven’t yet been able to increase. When making the decision to leave these running, consider their impact on your overall account-level CTR.
If these keywords have huge impression counts and really bad CTR (the cause of bad QS if you don’t have landing page penalties) then the cost of leaving them running isn’t just the over-bidding you’re likely to have to do on those keywords. Those bad keywords will actually help lower the quality score (albiet only slightly) on all the good keywords in your account.
But if those keywords have only a relatively low impression count as a percentage of your total account, the ‘collateral damage’ of leaving them running will be very slight. So go ahead and run them guilt-free if you really want to.
ClickEquations at SMX Advanced London
Alex Cohen and I are in London this week, speaking at SMX Advanced.

If you’ll be there, come check us out at these sessions:
- May 17 – 10:30am : Exploring Google’s New Ad Formats
- May 17 – 1:00pm : Amazing New PPC Tactics
- May 18 – 1:15pm: Top Ten Customised Search Analytics Reports
To schedule a personal meeting while we’re here, just email us at marketing@clickequations.com.
Secret Truth Series #15: Bid Lipstick on a Keyword Pig
Bidding is the magic elixer of paid search.
It’s the solution to any problem, the driver of all success and the cause of all failure. Once you have the right keywords, bidding is the main activity of paid search management.
It’s critical to get your bids right. If your bids aren’t properly set, intelligently managed, and constantly cultivated it’s effectively impossible to succeed at paid search.
This all is common knowledge.
And it’s all untrue.
The idea that bidding is important/critical/central to paid search is based on several assumptions:
- We have good data on which to make bid decisions.
- The data we have from the past is predictive of the future.
- Our algorithms are able to take this good and predictive data and recommend a better bid
- The effect of a bid change is clear and direct
Let’s look at those one at a time.
Lipstick On A Pig
Keywords are the false gods of paid search, as we discussed earlier, but they have another problem too: keyword metrics aren’t really reporting on the keyword itself, but rather on the combination of the keyword and all the options that are set around it.
Click-through rates and conversion rates, for example, are the result of how targeted the search queries were based on the match type used and the quality score received, how appropriate the ad copy was for those queries, and how persuasive the landing page and offer were to the people who clicked through.
That same keyword matched to different queries, with different ad copy, and different landing pages and offers would/could perform much differently. It’s shorthand to say that the keyword had a 2% conversion rate – it was really the entire advertising program built around the keyword that earned that result.
Yet bid algorithms, with our approval, make bid decisions as if the keyword metrics were much more conclusive than they really are. Suppose the queries change (which they do every day) or the ad copy is rewritten or tested (which it should be several times within the 30 day window used for most bid decisions). Isn’t it kinda kookie to ignore these variations and just pretend that the data is clear or reliable?
In ‘21 Secrets‘ I talk about getting keywords ‘bid ready’. The idea is to create a stable and functional environment around the keyword, to deliver better and more stable data, before putting much effort into bidding.
As the book points out, worrying about bidding on keywords before they’re ‘bid-ready’ is a text-book case of garbage in, garbage out.
Past Results May Not Suggest Future Performance
So if our keywords aren’t bid-ready the data on our keywords is pretty dirty. And in most cases (probably 80% of active keywords) the data is also really sparce. There just aren’t many clicks or conversions on most keywords over a week or even month long period.
Predicting the future based on sparce data about the past is extremely difficult.
And even is there is plenty of data, it’s a pretty big assumption to think that last week is gonna be like next week.
The world and our businesses don’t operate at a steady state. So even if we’re not in a strictly cyclical business – where summer dresses have a rise and fall – there are all kinds of time-based or external factors from competitor promotions to weather to holidays to news events.
One only has to look at a performance trend report of any keyword – on CTR, conversion rate, even impressions – to see that if you picked any one period from the past and projected forward as if that period was representative, you would have misjudged a bunch of what in fact happened later. Yet that’s what the bid algo’s do.
It’s hard not to believe numbers – as pointed out in the recent post on averages – especially when we’re working so hard to get them. But it’s not really that the numbers are lying, we’re just reading more into them then they can accurately provide.
The Smart Black Box or The Perfect Rube Goldberg
But forget all of that – take all the imperfect data, assume the past predicts the future in ways it probably doesn’t, decide which and how much data to consider (another massive black hole we’ll skip over), and hand it over to your bid algorithm for analysis and a recommendation.
There are all kinds of bid algorithms. Some use simple math while others rely on very complex mathematics.
There are also all bid rule systems (which differ from algorithms) and base decisions on a series of measured factors and nested If/Then/Else criteria.
Few or none of these take into account that the data they’re based on may be flawed or even terrible.
All of them ignore dozens or perhaps hundreds of variables and factors that almost anyone would agree clearly effect ‘the right bid’.
Regardless, they do their best and out comes a new bid recommendation. Good luck with that.
Why Does The Garage Go Up When I Flush This Toilet?
What does raising (or lowering) your bid mean anyway? The relationship is not simple nor direct.
We know how bid connects to Ad Rank (Secret Truth #9) and how Quality Score impacts bidding (Secret Truth #10). Together these explain that what we’re willing to pay (our Max CPC or Bid) is only indirectly related to our the amount we do pay (our actual or average CPC).
And many other factors are at play:
- In some cases, our actual cost-per-click is far below our bid. In other cases, our cost-per-click is consuming 100% of our bid.
- If we change our bid but our position (ok, average position) doesn’t change, what effect did the bid change really have?
- Quality score is unique to every keyword-text ad combo, changes per geography, is influenced by the query, and evolves over time.
- Raising a keyword bid also expands the scope of matched queries for which you can enter the auction and earn sufficient ad rank to appear. So like butterfly wings changing your bid alters the environment you were trying to control or effect.
I could go on. And yet just about every bid algorithm I’m aware of ignores – all this and more.
It’s hard to shake the notion that bid up = pay more = higher position, but strictly speaking it’s far from that simple.
The Twenty Percent Solution
So what is an advertiser to do? Two things:
1) Spend your time organizing and optimizing your campaigns and keywords before you worry much about bidding. As the 21 Truths in this series highlight, there are a lot of ways to impact your results that are directly within your control. Master them.
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2) Think about bidding as having *at most* a 10-20% impact on your success. Bids interact with keywords and match types and quality scores and text ads and landing pages and everything else. Treat them as part of the system.
It was via Brad Geddes via David Szetela that I first heard the significance of bidding put into its place with these kind of numbers. I’m pretty sure I later saw Dennis Yu give a clever talk and example that drove home the same point. I’m sure others have said it as well.
There is no way to say whether bidding in general a 5% factor or a 45% factor – it doesn’t matter and it certainly varies from keyword to keyword.
But what is clear is that for even the best bid algorithms or rules or strategies to do their job, they must be applied to well designed, managed, and optimized campaigns and keywords.
- A good bid on a bad keyword (or based on bad keyword data) leads to a bad result.
- A good bid on a good keyword-system plays an important role and can absolutely make or save you money.
Bidding Is Important
This post wasn’t intended as bid-bashing. As the book says, I believe you should spend a lot of time on bidding after you’ve spent a lot of time on everything else.
But bidding is very often over-emphasised, mis-represented, and mis-prioritized.
The right way to bid, the right algorithms, the role of rules, the solution to sparce data, the implications of time, the way to factor in all the factors – these are all topics for another time and place.
Until then, make sure your keywords are ready before you set or manipulate their bids. And have reasonable expectations for the bids and bid changes you do make. They’re doing the best they can, but the available information and state of the technology limits severely limit their potential.
What Do You Think?
This blog post is part of a series extending and amplifying the ideas in our free ebook ’21 Secret Truths of High-Resolution PPC’.
What they’re saying: “Everything you know about AdWords is the basics Google wanted you to know. Just enough to get you hooked. But what if there was fundamental secrets that they neglected to share? Would you want to know them? Now you can! 21 Secrets Truths is what you must read, no, act on, before your competitors do.”
- Bryan Eisenberg Conversion Expert and New York Times Best-Selling Author ’.


This blog post is part of a series extending and amplifying the ideas in our free ebook ’21 Secret Truths of High-Resolution PPC’.






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